LO4 Feedback report

 After obtaining feedback from both the focus group and questionnaire we have determined that as a group the best way to improve our product would be by syncing Ellis with the lyrics from the song more carefully which would allow us to make the cuts more fluid and engaging for the audience, we believe that if we had done this it would've most likely resulted in more shares which would further propel the video. To build on this the way we implemented special effects could have been done better, as our final product only consists of a few green screen shots, some static effects and a warp effect that folded the screen on itself. If we had implemented these special effects better we could have made our product look more professional. However given that we actually now have experience I believe we could focus our skills as editors and add more and better special effects. Furthermore we realised from feedback that by filming more shots and different takes we could have made our product look more finished as after rewatching with this in mind, we noticed many things that could have been fixed or improved upon during filming or editing. So to fix this in the future we can make sure to take our time and constantly add to our product until we are happy with the final version, But we are happy with the product as this was our first attempt ever making a music video.

Elliot Crawley a student at New College:

1.Did you enjoy the music video? yes I enjoyed it 

2.After watching this music video, are you more inclined to listen to 1Mawbs music? yes  

3.What did you enjoy about most? The glitch and static effects that were used

4.Is there anything you would've included? Maybe more locations and different types of shots

5.Is there anything you didn't like in the music video? It felt unfinished at some points and the ending felt awkward, almost like you ran out of shots.

6.What feedback would you give about editing techniques used in this video? Film more takes and make sure that it doesn't feel unfinished at some moments. 

Toby Katerina a student at Doncaster UTC:

1.Did you enjoy the music video? Yes it was okay. 

2.After watching this music video, are you more inclined to listen to 1Mawbs music? Yes if I have nothing else to do.

3.What did you enjoy about most? The transitions and cuts showing Ellis at different angles. 

4.Is there anything you would've included? Not that I can think of. 

5.Is there anything you didn't like in the music video? Nope

6.What feedback would you give about editing techniques used in this video? Some scenes ellis is a tiny bit out of sync with the song but overall its good. 

Charlie Mitchell a student at Doncaster UTC:

1.Did you enjoy the music video? Yes I did. 

2.After watching this music video, are you more inclined to listen to 1Mawbs music? Not really since the genre isn’t my type of music. 

3.What did you enjoy about most? The cuts to different parts of the video for example the cut of them jumping into the river the back to Ellis’s rapping. 

4.Is there anything you would've included? no

5.Is there anything you didn't like in the music video? No 

6.What feedback would you give about editing techniques used in this video? Some of the lyrics didn’t sync up to his mouth but that’s the only thing I would change